A song that I wrote about 3 years ago and I just finished it

UNBREAKABLE

its so hard to feel
when you dont know whats real
i wanted you to see
how much you mean to me
people are always fading
the homeless are always begging

i am always falling down
i cant stand on my own

i waited for you to come around
there is no sound
no one can heal my broken heart
now that its falling apart
im losing everything i came to be
baby why cant you see
i need someway to fix what hast been done
i wish i was unbreakable

you dont even know me
dont ever try to show me
life is filled with tragic
what happened to all the magic
please fall down with me
and see what i see

you cant handle the truth
yet tonight there is no proof

i waited for you to come around
there is no sound
no one can heal my broken heart
now that its falling apart
im losing everything i came to be
baby why cant you see
i need someway to fix what hast been done
i wish i was unbreakable

i wish i could never fall apart
give you all my heart
i'll hold you in my arms forever
and never let go
i wanna be unbreakable

i waited for you to come around
there is no sound
no one can heal my broken heart
now that its falling apart
im losing everything i came to be
baby why cant you see
i need someway to fix what hast been done
i wish i was unbreakable

i wish i could never fall apart
give you all my heart
i'll hold you in my arms forever
and never let go
i wanna be unbreakable

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Comment by Alex on November 2, 2010 at 4:09pm
I think we all wish to be unbreakable. Great song. It takes a lot of courage to put something on the internet and give people free range to write what they think (good or bad), so kudos to you for being able to do that!
Comment by Bald and Fabulous AKA Terri on November 2, 2010 at 8:33pm
Beautiful song and beautifully written
Comment by N on November 2, 2010 at 10:47pm
I loved the begining "It is so hard to see...when you don't knwo what is real" so beautiful; thanks
Comment by Brandi Badzinski on November 3, 2010 at 1:18pm
thanks for your opinion i really appreciate it song writting is my way of getting my feelings out

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