The mirror once a friend
a daily visit quite the trend.

A look here a look there
to adjust and smooth and stare.

not out of vanity or conciete
just to insure that all was orederly an neat.

but friends no more are we
for i do not recognize the image that i see.

No more aburn hair or long eye lashes
no more eye brows or funny mustashes.
just an image that looks unfinished.

but as i gaze at my reflection
im a sexy bitch apon closer inspection.

smooth sleek and clean
rather handsom and keen!

i dont need my old friend any more it seems

i have new friends with familer faces
beautifull and unique all from dif places.

a poem by
Brian E Kirchman

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O.K. This is way cool. I like it a lot. It captures how I felt about 3 months into my total hair loss episode. Great job Brian.
Thanks for sharing Brian.
This really hits home.
Jeff
"just an image that looks unfinished."

Brian, the best thing to complete your "skin canvas" is your great smile!

I really enjoyed your poem, are you a poet at heart and have you been writing for a long time?
I LOVE IT!!!!
That was great, very nicely done!
thanks all i was happy with it
Very well done! At last those who know exactly how we feel!
Thanks for sharing!!!!
Brian, I like it.... :)

Zoey

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